It is great! Beautifully and naturally written, and I loved the thought underneath the way you put the lines.
To be honest, I can’t see observation as something separated from me, because I had it like that for years, and has become an almost permanent action that runs in parallel with what I do. I even see the picture of me from outside during my daily actions. Not at 100% of course, but at least at 70%. I guess it was something I trained my mind to do, because I had seen the blessings and the transformations that brought to me when I used to do it as a separated action.
Basically almost all of my poems are results of that, in a way.
But, it is a beautiful challenge and I can take it!
I’m not gonna put a deadline, but I’ll do it!
Thank you, Alice! : )